"You talk as if a god had made the Machine.. Men made it, do not forget that. Great men, but men. The Machine is much, but it is not everything. I see something like you in this plate, but I do not see you. I hear something like you through this telephone, but I do not hear you. That is why I want you to come. Pay me a visit, so that we can meet face to face, and talk about the hopes that are in my mind."The machine stops - 1909 - Forster

Thursday, April 8, 2010

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Eleonora C. ( sub 4 )



Valentina ( sub 4 )


4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Thank you teacher!!!
So now, I hope I'll pass the Trinity exam... But I'm sad when I think that we haven't a lot of time before the end of the Trinity course and before the end of the school: I don't want to leave my best friends and my teachers... BYE-BYE!!!!!!! ELE

Anonymous said...

- - -MY WURSTEL-SHAPED DOG- - -
I got Isotta for Christmas. She’s a black puddle with two brown spot on her eyes and she is brown on the neck and under the chin. She’s got all the paws brown and she’s got a extremely long and black tail. Isotta’s coat’s so bright it shines. When she hears somebody who arrives, she runs, in front of the door and she barks. When you open the door, she lays down and she turns up her pink hot belly because she wants your cuddles ;if she is very , she herself do pee on her. I call Isotta my “wurstelette” because she’s long, but she’s plump, too.

- - -MY RUBBER STICK BAND- - -
My rubber stick band cat is Cipria. Her name is Cipria because is as orange-pink as the powder. Now, she’s nineteen…Exactly, isn’t only older than me in the cat’s life, but she is older than me in the man’s life, too! Now is thus reduced to skin and bone that seems to become increasingly smaller… in fact all my friends of mine think she is a kitty! worn is so old and look like a duster and worn has so curios big eyes and look like ET!!! you can do so little as the merged!!!! Every evenings she goes on my mum’s shoulder!!!! When she starts to purr she meow four time and she said us HELLO!!!!!!!!!!! For all day my cat sleep under the radiator!!!!

by Gavotto Matteo 3A

Anonymous said...

teacher, I'm sure I've putted the 4th subtitle on the blog.................. And I've just searced them on the blog but I didn't find it... did you see them??????????????
at tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

You saw the first, the second and the third subtitle, but only the first is “good”...the second and the third are too shorts. I tried to lengthen...

2nd subtitle- WHAT I DO WITH HER
So, in my daily routine I stay with her one hour...we often play with “mordicchio” (a little dangerous ball). Sometimes we play with Mojito (my cat) and Sally (my grand-mother's dog). Noa like playing with them, but she can't stand Sally. When Sally and Noa play, Noa begin nervous...sometimes, in the week, we go to te wood behind my house. We like going for a walks. Noa like playing in the snow and she like playing with the snow, too. Sometimes, when I'm reading in the garden, she come to me and she look to me. I know that when she come to me, and i have a book, she'd like to hear.

3rd subtitle-MY LAST SUMMER WITH HER
In my last holiday I brought Noa with me. We went to the sea and we went in mountain, too. We went to the sea for play. During the day, we built sandcastle and then we broke them. The evening we went to the pier. We were happy and crazy everyday. Tha last evening, we went to the beach and we did the swim. Despite Noa afraid of water, she did the swim with us. When we went to the mountain we went for walks everyday. We did some pique nique. The evening we were happy but very tired, too.

4th subtitle-MY NEXT ANIMAL
In my life, I'm going to have lots of animals. My next animal, I think is a dog. At the moment I have one dog (Noa) and two cat (Mojito and Tobia). My favourite animal is the dog...so, my next ideal dog is going to have long, dark coat, a big blacj├Čk nose, brown eyes, and is going to is a Golden Retriever.
If it is going to be a “boy”, his name will be “Marley”.
If it is going to be a “girl”, her name will be “Maya”.

thank you teacher!
by Arianna